When she meets her old flame at a student reunion abroad, an engaged CEO must decide whether to cancel the wedding for the affair and move to a foreign country without any safety.
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When she meets her old flame at a student reunion abroad, an engaged CEO must decide whether to cancel the wedding for the affair and move to a foreign country without any safety.
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Your story is a single question. Tells us everything around the decision.
Here red is my take on Titanic, it may help.
desparate to escape her abusive fiance a bankrupt heiress falls in love with a penniless artist on board Titanc.
Gives you back story and motives. ?No doubt in your story, but not evident in your logline.
The logline is missing the hook. The logline needs that ‘one extra thing’ that makes the story stand out.
Agree with Richiev.
What if the old flame she meets at the class reunion after becoming engaged to a man is…. a girl?
(Why not? ?Complicated bixsexual relationships are a fact of life. ?And thanks to the greater acceptance of ?the LGBT community, it’s no longer a totally taboo subject.)