When she meets her old flame at a student reunion abroad, an engaged CEO must decide whether to cancel the wedding for the affair and move to a foreign country without any safety.
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When she meets her old flame at a student reunion abroad, an engaged CEO must decide whether to cancel the wedding for the affair and move to a foreign country without any safety.
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Agree with Richiev.
What if the old flame she meets at the class reunion after becoming engaged to a man is…. a girl?
(Why not? ?Complicated bixsexual relationships are a fact of life. ?And thanks to the greater acceptance of ?the LGBT community, it’s no longer a totally taboo subject.)
The logline is missing the hook. The logline needs that ‘one extra thing’ that makes the story stand out.
Your story is a single question. Tells us everything around the decision.
Here red is my take on Titanic, it may help.
desparate to escape her abusive fiance a bankrupt heiress falls in love with a penniless artist on board Titanc.
Gives you back story and motives. ?No doubt in your story, but not evident in your logline.