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kajtaylorPenpusher
Posted: March 15, 20182018-03-15T09:41:57+10:00 2018-03-15T09:41:57+10:00In: Superhero

When the world?s greatest and most hated superhero is forced into retirement after yet another fuck up, he searches for his successor via a reality television show where each week contestants battle against villains and each other to prove they can become the next Universal Hero.

When the world?s greatest and most hated superhero is forced into retirement after yet another fuck up, he searches for his successor via a reality television show where each week contestants battle against villains and each other to prove they can become the next Universal Hero.
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    1. Knightrider Mentor
      2018-03-16T10:34:33+10:00Added an answer on March 16, 2018 at 10:34 am

      Yep, maybe his powers are fading so secretly he is going to use the constant to find someone he can steal their powers off – after all he still wants to be the most powerful hero.

      Plus would be good second chance but he learns that you pass on the lessons to the next generation not keep them for your self

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    2. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2018-03-16T06:57:26+10:00Added an answer on March 16, 2018 at 6:57 am

      Keep with the retiring hero. There is a lot of gold in that:
      Can?t let go of his glory days
      The ?you don?t do it that way?
      People like the new guy more than him etc

      Start with forced into retirement. The other stuff you can show in the action of the Logline.

      A bitter superhero forced into retirement uses a reality show to find his successor.

      We all know what reality shows look like. So you have space to add some story about his emotional journey.

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2018-03-15T13:34:08+10:00Added an answer on March 15, 2018 at 1:34 pm

      This should probably be told from the point of view of one of the contestants who is vying for the position of next great?Super Hero.

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    4. dpg Singularity
      2018-03-15T13:30:01+10:00Added an answer on March 15, 2018 at 1:30 pm

      There’s a potentially interesting story here, but I suggest the setup needs a do over:

      if he’s being forced by others to retire, wouldn’t it be up to them to tap? his replacement?? Hasn’t he lost the status, the authority to make that call himself? And since he’s the fall guy for the fuck ups, why would the people forcing him out trust him with the task?

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