Lost in Sydney
When two people who admire each other from afar cross paths, they let the opportunity of a lifetime to meet pass them by.
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You’ve given away the end. Maybe you can make it more interesting… When two lost strangers paths cross, they make hard decisions that shape the rest of their lives. Or somehow include why they didn’t meet…. but don’t give away the ending. They make a choice, maybe it was a bad choice.?
You’ve given away the end. Maybe you can make it more interesting… When two lost strangers paths cross, they make hard decisions that shape the rest of their lives. Or somehow include why they didn’t meet…. but don’t give away the ending. They make a choice, maybe it was a bad choice.?
Thanks for reviewing and input artistami. This was a logline I’m working on for a 2 minute short film challenge I was given today. Finding it extremely hard to come up with a solid logline for so short of a film. Anyone else have a suggestion?
Thanks for reviewing and input artistami. This was a logline I’m working on for a 2 minute short film challenge I was given today. Finding it extremely hard to come up with a solid logline for so short of a film. Anyone else have a suggestion?
Since this is a two minute short, I am going to try a non-traditional logline. How about this?
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“When two strangers gaze from afar, they enter a conversation of mutual attraction; no words spoken but their meaning clear.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
Since this is a two minute short, I am going to try a non-traditional logline. How about this?
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“When two strangers gaze from afar, they enter a conversation of mutual attraction; no words spoken but their meaning clear.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!