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missturman
Posted: February 1, 20132013-02-01T12:55:44+10:00 2013-02-01T12:55:44+10:00In: Public

When young woman receives bad news, she must seek ways to keep going through her grief.

Footsteps in the Dark

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    1. Kriss Tolliday
      2013-02-01T19:36:51+10:00Added an answer on February 1, 2013 at 7:36 pm

      What’s the bad news? What will she do to get over it? What will happen if she doesn’t? This sounds like a line for many films involving someone who receives bad news so what makes yours different and stand out? This is far too vague so far.

      Love the title though.

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    2. steveylang Samurai
      2013-02-02T06:43:18+10:00Added an answer on February 2, 2013 at 6:43 am

      This is the most unspecific logline I have seen in awhile. Kriss’ comments are good.

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    3. Shadow Penpusher
      2013-02-03T16:08:59+10:00Added an answer on February 3, 2013 at 4:08 pm

      You really need to be more specific and clear. You need a main character and a goal or mission.

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