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Kai_bree
Posted: October 29, 20142014-10-29T07:36:53+10:00 2014-10-29T07:36:53+10:00In: Public

Will these teenagers? unruly habits kill them? Or will it do enough damage to make them wish it did?

Bad Habits

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2014-10-29T08:39:04+10:00Added an answer on October 29, 2014 at 8:39 am

      Who is the main character?
      What do they want?
      Who or what is standing in the way?

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      2014-10-29T08:39:04+10:00Added an answer on October 29, 2014 at 8:39 am

      Who is the main character?
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      Who or what is standing in the way?

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    3. lewisricekrispy Penpusher
      2014-10-29T08:39:41+10:00Added an answer on October 29, 2014 at 8:39 am

      Your logline should ideally be
      about someone
      Who wants something
      by doing something else
      But something stands in their way.

      An unruly teen
      must learn to say no
      to his gangland friends
      before his way of life results in his death.

      Or something like that.

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    4. lewisricekrispy Penpusher
      2014-10-29T08:39:41+10:00Added an answer on October 29, 2014 at 8:39 am

      Your logline should ideally be
      about someone
      Who wants something
      by doing something else
      But something stands in their way.

      An unruly teen
      must learn to say no
      to his gangland friends
      before his way of life results in his death.

      Or something like that.

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    5. 2014-10-30T03:32:41+10:00Added an answer on October 30, 2014 at 3:32 am

      Are you planning to explore the teen’s wish for death? Is this part of the plot? Does it need to be emphasized in the logline?

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    6. 2014-10-30T03:32:41+10:00Added an answer on October 30, 2014 at 3:32 am

      Are you planning to explore the teen’s wish for death? Is this part of the plot? Does it need to be emphasized in the logline?

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