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Posted: October 24, 20202020-10-24T11:53:03+10:00 2020-10-24T11:53:03+10:00In: Superhero

With a near-bankrupt Gotham City descending into chaos in the wake of an unjustified police shooting, Lieutenant James Gordon is approached on behalf of a group of Gotham’s bankers to instigate a police-lead coup of Mayor Garcia’s administration and install leadership more favourable to the banker’s wishes so as to restore order to the city.

This is a Batman graphic novel that attempts to capture the sentiments of all that is happening in 2020, inspired specifically by social unrest, efforts to defund the police and the fleeing tax base of New York City. It involves a ‘Banker Plot’ that is based around the failed Business Plot of 1933 (with James Gordon as Smedley Butler and disaffected police officers of Gotham serving in place of the returned servicemen) and the Wilmington Insurrection of 1898, the first and only overthrow of a U.S city. 

Further, you have Bruce Wayne, the richest man in Gotham, as a means by which journalist Vicki Vale can access the wealthy circles of Gotham and corroborate the suspicions of Gordon about the plot, just as Butler had relied on a journalist to corroborate his theorising about the Business Plot in 1933.

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    1. Ninann22 Logliner
      2020-10-25T04:53:39+10:00Added an answer on October 25, 2020 at 4:53 am

      Sorry, when I read the logline I was a bit confused. I got the first part, Gotham going bankrupt. Then bankers go to a lieutenant to stop a mayor? It’s a superhero movie, but where is the superhero? I read the summary that it’s based on a graphic novel. To me, it reads political drama. To make it more understandable Just concentrate on the main protagonist, the conflict, antagonist force( who is trying to stop the protagonist) and the main goal. Don’t use a person’s name in the logline. Just list the protagonist and a adjective that describes them. It needs some refining, but your goal is to have a logline that is simple, everyone gets it, and wants to read it. Keep up the hard work.

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      • dpg Singularity
        2020-10-28T05:48:20+10:00Replied to answer on October 28, 2020 at 5:48 am

        I don’t know how to put it gently, so here’s the hard legal and economic truth about prospects for the story concept.

        DC Comics owns the trademark and copyright for the Batman character. So any representation of the character, such as in a graphic novel, is DOA, actually DBA (dead before arrival) because it will require a license from DC Comics. Which is not easy to get as the company zealously enforces its trademarks and copyrights and demands creative control of how it’s character is portrayed.

        And if license is granted, it will cost.

        A lot. In addition to the legal fees you will need to pay a team of your lawyers to negotiate with their team of lawyers.

        Just saying.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2020-10-25T05:44:52+10:00Added an answer on October 25, 2020 at 5:44 am

      As Ninann22 said. Where’s the superhero and what’s his superpower?

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      • SDMann Logliner
        2020-10-27T19:15:32+10:00Replied to answer on October 27, 2020 at 7:15 pm

        Thanks, I’ve just confirmed that Batman is not in fact a superhero (according to Robert Pattinson too in a recent news story). He has a secondary storyline in this narrative.

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        • Richiev Singularity
          2020-10-28T05:38:15+10:00Replied to answer on October 28, 2020 at 5:38 am

          Of course Batman is a superhero otherwise, he wouldn’t have been accepted as a member of the Super Friends…

          How you too can become a Super Hero 🙂
          A: Born an alien: Superman
          B: Changed by radiation: Spiderman/fantastic 4
          C: Being a Mutant: X-men
          D: Superpowers acquired through scientific experiment: Ant-Man
          E: Magic: scarlet witch
          F: Being a mythological figure: Thor
          G: Being a hero through great skill and or gadgets: Black Widow, Green Arrow, Batman

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