10yr old Ava likes to play with robots, but when a terrorist attack leaves her town devastated, Ava becomes determined to make her robot protect people and make everyone smile again.

A robot obsessed young girl invents a new bot in an attempt to make her town feel safe again after a devastating terrorist attack.

This has a goal, no character names which can get confusing, and is clear and concise.

A robot obsessed young girl invents a new bot in an attempt to make her town feel safe again after a devastating terrorist attack.

This has a goal, no character names which can get confusing, and is clear and concise.

No need for the MC name and age - 'a young robot enthusiast' will do.

No need to describe that the MC becomes 'determined', as most good MC's become determined, it's implicit. ?What is the main action the girl takes in the film? Becoming determined could be one moment in one scene, but it's what she does as a result which matters most.

Lastly agreed with Craig and DPG, she needs a clearer goal.