1861, Camargue, France. A young orphan Provencal is shanghaied by a rogue Confederate ship on its maiden voyage out of England and journeys into the US Civil War running a cargo of guns through the Union blockade known as the “Anaconda.”

by markferland · Penpusher · 120 pts 0 views

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The Ballad of Franco Loco.
This logline only sets up the rest of the story from the first inciting event. This is a hero’s journey (my first script and first logline btw).
There is much more to the story, however. But I am finding it impossible to work it all into a 239 character logline (per IMDb website for outline).
Thank you in advance for your suggestions.

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BenGilani · Samurai · 2,070 pts

Hi markferland,
Congratulations on your first script and first logline. Since you are writing your first script and this is your first logline, I strongly recommend:
1- Clicking on the 'Formula' icon at the top of this page. Study the contents
2- Re-write using widely understood terms
3- Use correct grammar and check your spelling before posting.

I wish you good luck and hope to see more of your loglines