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I'm struggling to tell what kind of story this is... When I read the logline it feels like a straight up drama, but then when you add the title it makes it feel like a comedy. Maybe that's just my perception, but the title makes it sound funny.
It also feels a bit wordy. All the info is good but maybe it can just be reworded to flow a bit better... like..
"After a crack addicted pickup artist falls for a woman at Narcotics Anonymous, the struggle between his addiction and her love take him to the edge of sanity."
So many possibilities with this.. good luck!
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