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>>I felt that the wife's action, inner as it?may be, needs mentioning.
An interesting observation and it touches on my objective goal in posting a logline for the film. ?The outward action is her preparations for their 45th wedding celebration. ?But that ?just provides a contextual framework, an arena in which she must wrestle with the dramatic problem of their marriage revealed (to her) by the discovery of the body after nearly ?half a century.
>>I felt that the wife's action, inner as it?may be, needs mentioning.
An interesting observation and it touches on my objective goal in posting a logline for the film. ?The outward action is her preparations for their 45th wedding celebration. ?But that ?just provides a contextual framework, an arena in which she must wrestle with the dramatic problem of their marriage revealed (to her) by the discovery of the body after nearly ?half a century.
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After the body of her husband's 1st lover is discovered, a contented wife must rationalise for herself her husbands feelings if they are to celebrate their 45th wedding anniversary.
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I felt that the wife's action, inner as it?may be, needs mentioning. Other wise she becomes passive and,?despite the low concept aspect of the story, that ain't good.