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Thank you... :D
You're welcome, good luck with your script!
Thank you.
I do like your changes and will be using that one. :)
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After a covert agent's branded a terrorist, he has forty-eight hours to stop the perpetrators of a conspiracy that'll frame him for a new World War.
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I want to thank you and dpg so much for all your help. It is very much appreciated:)
The treatment is complete, not long started the screenplay. I just wanted to see if people like the idea of the story. :)
A good rewrite! Nice job :)
Some very minor changes:
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After a covert agent's branded a terrorist, he has forty-eight hours to stop the perpetrators of a conspiracy that'll frame him for a new World War.
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I think you have almost got this one down?
"Is this written? Or are you testing the idea by first creating a logline?
Revision 4: When a covert agent is branded a terrorist, he has forty-eight hours to find the perpetrators of a conspiracy that will frame him for a new World War.
I like it. I have created another with a mixture of everything discussed :D
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