When an elite intergalactic warrior discovers that a greedy, powerful cabal plans to deport almost the entire human race to a life of slavery in mines on an alien planet he risks his career and his life in order to save the human race and the woman he loves

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Protectors of the species

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pandedyer · Initiate · 95 pts

I was instantly drawn in but instantly confused by the word "cabal" which was distracting. How about slave trader instead and use the word export instead of deport.

Karel Segers · Maestro · 2,890 pts

Hi Richiev! I like your version, but does non discover enough the story i wrote!

Karel Segers · Maestro · 2,890 pts

Hi Patrick! What do you mean about "define where are the powerful cabal is"?

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