A homicide detective goes on the run to prove his innocence after he’s framed for murder by a malevolent police cyber-intelligence.

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Hi Leeb0159.

The latest draft of the logline reads best and outlines a clear plot personally I prefer the second option:

"After being framed for murder by a malevolent police cyber-intelligence, a homicide detective goes on the run to prove his innocence."

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

That makes sense. I think I might just simplify everything and reveal the true antag in logline. How do either of these revisions read? Thanks for the invaluable feedback.

A homicide detective goes on the run to prove his innocence after he's framed for murder by a malevolent police cyber-intelligence.

After being framed for murder by a malevolent police cyber-intelligence, a homicide detective goes on the run to prove his innocence.