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I'm guessing you're alluding to the fact that he (and his clique) are racially prejudiced, which, if stated would certainly add to the irony of his predicament.
Why / how is he 'forced' to stay with her family? Is it a punishment? Is he stranded?
How does someone 'accidentally' fall in love? Is he actively trying to dislike her?
What is his goal? What is at stake?
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And the rest? So far you have a premise and a situation, but no antagonist, stakes or goal...
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