A Jamaican immigrant, stressed by life in the US, takes her tween son on a getaway to her homeland she won’t soon forget.

by malaika · Initiate · 35 pts September 13, 2020 7 views

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malaika · Initiate · 35 pts September 20, 2020

Thank you for your clarifying questions! I'll incorporate their answers into the revision of the logline.

malaika · Initiate · 35 pts September 20, 2020

Great points. Thank you for the feedback!

Odie · Maestro · 6,290 pts September 15, 2020

Crying shame to hear a Jamaican stressed!
In addition to the gaps iamlegendre mentioned, we all get stressed. Is there a stronger reason (inciting incident) for wanting to leave the life she built in the states?
Currently, all I can see is:
“Stressed by life in the US a Jamaican mother tween son homeland ”

Fill in the gaps so I can escape to Jamaica with you 😉

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