A Japanese soldier discovers his world around him in shambles when he survived and people perished during World War II.

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mobiuswest · Samurai · 780 pts

Internal and external conflict might be something to consider, the arrival of the allied forces and their behaviour on the mainland both good and bad clashed with a lot of the returning defeated infantry man, perhaps he has to learn to work with his recent enemy to achieve a certain tangible goal?

Wherever you choose to goal with those elements, I strongly suggest you ground the story in a lot of strong, well researched ideas.

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Jim in Japan.

Odie · Mentor · 6,290 pts

IvyEight6,
With proper research, this logline could be based on a true story which will greatly help your marketability, but please mind the respect a premise as this deserves.

Odie · Mentor · 6,290 pts

Great points from Mathias, I made him an Infantryman instead of a Major to ramp up valor.
“A surviving WWII Infantrymen must lead his fellow citizens beyond the nuclear blast zone of Nagasaki, Japan”

Take care.