A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.
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Thanks a lot! First time meeting in the story. Ah, I'd say more, but I don't want to give too much away
Apologies for the very late reply. Just fleshing out the idea for the story. I have several drafts of an outline for it completed and am ready to write it once I finish revisions on several other projects.
Ah, gotcha. Thanks for the suggestion!
Thanks. Definitely agree!
Apologies for the very late reply. It does indeed. Thanks a lot!
Is this script written?
Or are you just fleshing out the idea before you begin writing the story?
I only ask because if the story has not been written I would suggest that as a story point: the princess hates werewolves.
In other words, she believes that werewolves are responsible for the attack on her village but the lead character knows it's the evil knight.
At first, she captures the lead character and doesn't believe he is innocent she believes he attacked her village, but after a while, they reluctantly team up in order to take down the actual bad guy who attacked both villages.
This version is better than the first version by far.
Also, mikepedley85's suggestion is solid.