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I think it has potential, but there are still many things that have not yet been defined. For example, the risk you must overcome. Also I feel there are things to spare.
I think most of the elements are there. I'm left wondering who the "bad guys" are. Also, what are the stakes? Does he witness his own death? Overall pretty close.
This isn't so much a logline as it is a premise.
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