After being sexually abused by his older sister as a child, a man struggles to cope with the abuse by getting addicted to alcohol.

I wanted this movie to be a male version of Creep.

Hi IvyEight6,

I’ll give this a go…

After being sexually abused his older sister as a child, a man struggles to cope with the abuse by getting addicted to alcohol.

INTENTION: must get clean?
OBSTACLE: debilitating alcohol addiction. his demons.
STAKES: lose his family.

When his family threaten to leave him, a struggling alcoholic must confront the root of his addiction - the sexual abuse he endured as a child.

- This is fine but feels like it needs a good strong hook to separate it from dozens of stories like it. You could add the word “incestuous” before sexual abuse?

When his family threaten to leave him, a struggling alcoholic must confront the root of his addiction - the incestuous sexual abuse he endured as a child.

Good luck!

I revised it.