A meek sociologist researching on rape victims falls for one of his interviewees, only to find himself targeted by her assailant and the police.

Thanks for the notes guys, I'll make an alt. And yes, it is his involvement that brings attention to himself from the assailant and the police

I want to know why the sociologist is targeted. I think that is something that should be in here. Is it because he has become involved with the subject or is there a much bigger conspiracy taking place?

This logline breaks some of the rules, however it isn't that bad. I like the premise of the story and get a good idea of what the story is about from what you have written. I would probably change, "One of his interviewees" to "His subject" because it is shorter. Also, I would read a few loglines as well as the advice they get, then maybe tweak this one just a little.