A modern adaptation of Shakespeare’s Julius Caesar, told from the cutthroat, conniving, and competitive world of a woman-ran Software Company.

Hey guys. I wrote the script and hated it so now I am in the revise/rewrite process. The plot has even changed. The story that I'm trying to tell now is a film that depicts the 24 hours prior to Brutus deciding to join the conspirators.

I've made alterations to my original logline to try and have it properly depict the new storyline.

"In this prequel to Julius Caesar, Marcella Brutus vacillates between devotion to her deceased mother's corporation and affection for the megalomaniacal executive hell-bent on becoming its peerless leader."

Should more changes be made? Should I scrap the original and start completely over? Or should it all just be more simple?

Your thoughts and opinions are appreciated and needed!

BTW - thought the title was clever

Late entrant on this disucssion. As a logline it worked fine for me. We all know JC. And your logline tells us what's different.