A pacifistic NYPD cadet and a loner detective investigate the source of a new street drug, leading them to a notorious dealer; but they’re just a pawn, and someone much more powerful runs the operation.
Categories: Thriller
Categories: Thriller
You need to give the reader more details than are currently in the logline. What makes this duo's mission interesting? What is the major obstacle standing in their way? Right now this concept lacks unique elements needed to separate it from most police procedural fare on TV.
I agree. ?this logline reads too generic right now. Nothing hooks yet as feeling like a new or a mashup of familiar ideas used in a new way.
If the cadet refuses to fire, why doesn't the military fire him instead (pun intended)