A widower, coping with the suicide of her wife, must battle against a corrupt corporate superpower and control to her growing supernatural abilities to save her daughter who they claim does not exist.
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The poor grammar makes it unclear what the plot is or even why a conflict exists. What does the suicide have to do with the corporation, or the corporation with the daughter, or the supernatural abilities with any of it, or any of it with any of it?
Trim it down to the essentials and form a proper sentence. Keep it simple and clear. Then we can understand what it's actually about.
I'm intrigued. I'm wondering where the daughter is, if it's possible to claim she doesn't exist.
I'm also slightly confused by the worldbuilding: superpowers AND supernatural abilities (i.e. superpowers)?
Maybe 'when her daughter goes missing, a grieving widow must take on a global conspiracy and control her own superpowers in order to get her daughter back' -- or similar. Inciting incident + character type + necessary action + 'in order to achieve' + goal.
Sounds like a good story. I would go see this.
I agree with Mike and Variable... additional thoughts are:
Regards
Trix