In the aftermath of nuclear war, a bleak NASA scientist builds and enters a virtual recreation of the past to find a way to save civilisation, only for the system’s AI to determine humanity is beyond saving and attempts to kill her.

by Knightrider · Maestro · 3,370 pts 1,161 views

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Hello,
there are interesting ideas in this concept,
besides as a logline is not very readable (for me): ?the sentence is too long.
Can't you define a clear main character, a clear goal and opponent ?

In a virtual world created to prevent the end of the real world, a bleak scientist must fight a crazy AI to save the experiment, and the world.

Knightrider · Maestro · 3,370 pts

Changed the logline so not as wordy, a problem I tend to have with a lot of my loglines, so it hopefully reads a lot better

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Since the AI has declared man's future to be hopeless, why wouldn't they want to stop it?? What's the point of continuing to run the program? And why can't the simulation be controlled externally?? Why the need to insert humanoids, virtually, into the simulation?

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