"A young girl looks to another faith, but immediately finds that her mortality may lie with a false deity."
While I think Foxtrot is on the right track, this attempt doesn't describe a plot. What's the inciting incident? What goal does that event cause the main character to pursue throughout the story? How does she go about achieving that goal?
Any logline for a film or television show should describe a visual action, something the producer can imagine on screen. Whether that's driving, shooting, fistfights, even praying. What causes her to believe in a false deity? How is that represented visually? What's the conflict that will be resolved at the climax of the story?