After a mysterious new classmate places a curse on them, two teenage boys are forced to take action and unlock insidious secrets about their quaint Southern town and master their newly found gifts.

Categories:

More details Hide

Feature Film “Unearthly” Logline Review

4 reviews

Neer Shelter · Legend · 39,985 pts

This logline lacks clarity and doesn't specify a plot.

Why are there two main characters? Is there a need for dual a protagonist plot?

What is their goal? What are their character flaws?

Hope this helps.

pressedham_d · Penpusher · 175 pts

Why must they master these gifts? And if they've received gifts, where does the curse come in?

Richiev · Legend · 58,825 pts

You should tell us what the curse is since the entire story revolves around it.