After a reformed ex-gang member’s sister is raped and left for dead, he struggles to walk the straight and narrow as his stepmother blames him.

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blajay · Penpusher · 150 pts

Thanks Timmy and Kriss. Appreciate your comments. His hunt for the truth is to find them, expose them and make them pay... Remember the ending of Black Rain? Carlito's way? Not that my script is similar to those but its not what we think will happen, happens.

timmyelliot · Samurai · 1,080 pts

I like the ideas. My only suggestion would be to make it more surprising. Recidivism and revenge was exactly what I expected when I read the set-up. Recidivism is a well-known issue in our prison system, and an ex-con bent on revenge is tired. Why care should I care your story, when I can read it on the cnn website?

blajay · Penpusher · 150 pts

Returning from prison, a reformed ex-gang leader's sister is raped and left for dead. With his stepmom blaming him, he struggles with reversion and hunts the culprits.