“After his wife commits suicide, a renowned lifeguard learns that a close family member is the rapist. He must learn to forgive or drown in sea of anger and hate”
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After his wife commits suicide, a renowned lifeguard learns that his brother is the rapist. Will he forgive him or drown in a sea of anger and hate?
Why not just say so in the logline: "his brother"? "Close family member" is vague. It's no big story giveway if the reveal is in Act 1 or early in Act 2. After all, the plot seems to pivot on that information.
Why not just say so in the logline: "his brother"? "Close family member" is vague. It's no big story giveway if the reveal is in Act 1 or early in Act 2. After all, the plot seems to pivot on that information.