After hospital negligence leaves her son profoundly brain-injured, a mother consumed by anger risks alienating him as she struggles to let go of the boy he might have been and accept the boy he has become.

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Nothing wrong with that but if the logline went that way, the beginning (The part about the negligence and consumed with anger) should be changed.

Great input @Nir Shelter and @dpg. Thank you. I'm new here, so just learning how it all works. I appreciate the tips and feedback. The mother son relationship and her evolution is really the crux of the story.. she fights her ass off, through raging anger and an addiction that resurfaces as a result (which equals the potential risk of losing her son altogether) to basically learn to see the world, herself, her son and life in a completely different way and come out transformed. So, that being the case, it's clearer now that to start with or even mention "hospital negligence" really isn't relevant within the logline. Thanks again. L.

And I find more interesting the mother son relationship. Different strokes.

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