After one of them runs over his loving girlfriend while intoxicated, two teenage boys set off across the northern U.S. looking for a secure place to dump the body as soon as possible, while their friendship and criminal minds are tested.

Categories:

More details Hide

Dumped (Revision)

5 reviews

almiiitey · Wordsmith · 1,130 pts

When he accidentally kills girlfriend, teenager (main character's name) and his best friend (friend's name) must turn their perfectly planned road trip into the perfect way to dispose of the body. Just a thought on how you might shorten the logline.

almiiitey · Wordsmith · 1,130 pts

Thank you for the additional information. I will give it some thought and share additional ideas.

Carter Breaux · Penpusher · 160 pts

I pictured a "Road Trip/Gruesome Comedy" Of a movie, and the two main characters have made it their New Years resolution of going west towards California and Washington to "get away." lo and behold, the next day one runs over his girlfriend, giving them the call to action to run away. So over the course of the next few days, they search for a place that NOBODY will find her, but they must do it quickly before the body begins to rot. That's a little more of a detailed description of the beginning!