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Henry (a golf course ball picker) is a young man with a history of being unable to assimilate into normal society. With his best friend Bally, a talking golf ball, attempts from co-workers to help him leads to a series of ensuing chaos.
Hi Donn Curbow. Got it. His goal is to win the golf tournament so he can have a better life. You describe this as a revengeful goal--who is the person or persons he will get revenge against if he wins…
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Henry (a golf course ball picker) is a young man with a history of being unable to assimilate into normal society. With his best friend Bally, a talking golf ball, attempts from co-workers to help him leads to a series of ensuing chaos.
Hi Donna Curbow. I have enjoyed reading your comments. What is the most important thing your main character wants to accomplish in this story?
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When an assassin, who can control the actions of others, discovers his recent missions were actually un-sanctioned hits, he must now hunt down his mysterious employers who have now made him their top target.
It does. Thanks.
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When an assassin, who can control the actions of others, discovers his recent missions were actually un-sanctioned hits, he must now hunt down his mysterious employers who have now made him their top target.
Hi Knightrider1984. Please define extraggation. A Google search of the word was not very helpful. The stakes are clear in your logline--the psy-assassin's life is at stake in a world where anyone could be the killer. It wasn't clear what…
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When three Cambridge students discover they’ve stolen the hope diamond and sold it to a French businessman while being high, they travel to Paris to steal it back before exhibition day.
What are the stakes for the students if they don't get the diamond back?
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While an elderly woman lies in a comatose state, God grants her a second chance at redemption, for triggering world war 3 in her youth.
Thanks, Christopher, for the additional information. Did she intentionally cause World War 3?
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When two trains collide in her small western town, a brave young woman takes charge — and in the process meets a man who could change her life forever.
Dear Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat, Checking in to see if I have the irony of the story correctly identified--your main character physically frees people from a train wreck and, in the process, she meets the man who frees her from the psychological…
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While an elderly woman lies in a comatose state, God grants her a second chance at redemption, for triggering world war 3 in her youth.
Hi Christopher Hart, The stakes are clear in your logline. What did the woman do to place her soul in jeopardy? How does the coma influence what happens in your story? Looking forward to learning more.
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Former lovers Jane and Sarah risk their physical safety to fulfill their dream of publicly performing a dance which includes a nearly impossible lift that was banned 30 years ago due to the “dangerous lifestyle” it promoted.
Great to hear you have firsthand experience with the country in the film--lucky. The scenery is such a critical element of this film, especially when it is contrasted with Ennis succession of desperately dingy apartments and the brittle glitter of…
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Former lovers Jane and Sarah risk their physical safety to fulfill their dream of publicly performing a dance which includes a nearly impossible lift that was banned 30 years ago due to the “dangerous lifestyle” it promoted.
Truly inspiring comments dpg. Many thanks.
