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Hi Tony
Nice work, thanks for the feedback.
Hi B8C --
Love this idea -- feel your pain as I've has a bit of a play and it's been quite a task to formulate into a succinct logline -- fwiw, below is my shot:
"A lonely boy discovers a fairy-tale princess stuck up a condemned tree at his local park and must set her free by destroying the witch that put her there? his Dad's new beau."
I changed him from 'incorrigible' to lonely as I'm not sure how 'incorrigible' could relate to his goal -- regardless, best of luck with it... very cool :)
Sigh...this is getting a little frustrating. I can see it, just have trouble finding the correct words that work.
I'll sleep on in for a week or so and come back hopefully with some new ideas, I appreciate all the feedback, thank-you.
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