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It is rather ironic (if not a tad embarrassing) that for one who is such a sharp logline critic, Yours Truly is still making some basic mistakes with his own efforts. Oh well, take it on the chin, I suppose. By the way, Richiev and dpg, I want to tip my hat to both of you guys for consistently giving quality feedback in this site over the past 15 months or so.
I used "genocide" as a verb here only to try to cut the number of words down to remotely 25. That's all there is to it about that.
Richiev - fair comment about the need for loglines to be specific. Problem is, in this case, the complexities of the story do not lend the specifics to be "articulable" inside the holy grail of 25 words. (My previous version was more specific but used a lot more words - about double here, I think.)
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