After the death of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his drug addiction until he finds fulfillment in his long-forgotten passion: dancing

by eliasbaar · Penpusher · 190 pts 0 views

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After the death of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his drug addiction and leaves his old life for a long-forgotten passion: dancing.

 

Can you imagine/picture it? Does it make sense to YOU?

Or does it (drug addiction, dancing) need to be explained further/differently?

And which one do you like better?

 

Thanks xx

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Odie · Mentor · 6,290 pts

I vote for More Cowbell aka Richiev ballroom dancing version.
He's got the addict fever... and the cure... is more dancing ;)

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

"After the murder of his secret lover, a drug-addicted lawyer seeks revenge on those who killed the man he loved."

"After the murder of his secret lover, a drug-addicted lawyer seeks solace in ballroom dancing, but must overcome his addictions if he's to truly be free."

eliasbaar · Penpusher · 190 pts

His addiction problem. I worked out a slighty different logline.

What do you think about: "After the murder of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his addiction problem and leaves his old life to seek revenge."

...is it clearer know?