Abandoned with her two children in a large dismal house, a young woman must fight against ghosts until one day when …

Hello phoenixx50,

Thank you for your post.

This story is about a fight between livings and ghosts, but what happens after "when" cannot be told in the logline.

The Others in an existing movie(+++) with Nicole Kidman.

This logline is not the official one. I just wrote it quicly to introduce the topic. The goal is to write a good one. Are you interested?

if you have not already seen it and you want to know more about it, I recommend you don't read any summary before you watch it.

All the best

It builds suspense, but I assume a fight against ghosts would be suspense filled. I don't believe you need the 'when.' It makes it awkward.