An immortal warrior-princess from another universe unexpectedly falls in love with a human boy while hunting the shapechanger that murdered her parents.

Thanks cicpices. I'll try and make it a bit clearer.

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Thanks Nir. I agree, it's a little confusing as to whether it's predominately a revenge story or a romance. Still trying to nut that out myself. As to how immortals can be killed - happens in fantasy all the time (Highlander, Lord of the Rings, and squillions more). Not sure if I can work that into the logline, but I'm not sure it's confusing enough to leave it out either. See what others say. Either way, thanks for the pointer. Appreciate it.

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Thanks James, really apprecicat the feedback. Working hard on fixing it up.

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