An intrepid paleontologist battles deadly beasts on a Jovian moon after being hired by the U.S. government to join an interstellar crew to study an uncovered ancient fossil.
Categories: SciFi
Categories: SciFi
>>?they discover the relic's ability to morph them into terrifying creatures
Morph the crew into terrifying creatures?
And if so, then what must the paleontologist do about it -- what becomes the protagonist's objective goal as a result of this development?? The logline sets up a problem, but doesn't state what the protagonist must do about it.
Also, how would they know?a fossil might cure disease??There would have to be an egregious violation of quarantine and containment procedures (as in "Alien").? Okay, but before that you have to establish that it's now?sop to do trial tests?for the medicinal properties of ?fossils.
>>?they discover the relic's ability to morph them into terrifying creatures
Morph the crew into terrifying creatures?
And if so, then what must the paleontologist do about it -- what becomes the protagonist's objective goal as a result of this development?? The logline sets up a problem, but doesn't state what the protagonist must do about it.
Also, how would they know?a fossil might cure disease??There would have to be an egregious violation of quarantine and containment procedures (as in "Alien").? Okay, but before that you have to establish that it's now?sop to do trial tests?for the medicinal properties of ?fossils.
The plot is not clear as the logline describes a situation with no starting or ending points. What starts off the story and what does the paleontologist need to achieve?
In other words what are the inciting incident and goal?