An ordinary young man, is forced to become humankind’s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, wants to blow up the Earth.

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DARION: Origin – 2nd Version – Short and concise

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Darion · Penpusher · 170 pts

Nir Shelter - Once again, I'm profoundly grateful for your sound advice. Darn this seems so easy to do and now I discover how profound a logline creation can be. I'm brainstorming all this and have to get back to work and attempt it again. Will return...

Darion · Penpusher · 170 pts

Greetings CraigDGriffth. Gotcha. I'm refocusing to actually achieve that. Story elements, Check. Thanks a bunch.

Darion · Penpusher · 170 pts

FFF, I get you. I just replied to the previous, longer logline. Being new here I posted two loglines for the same purpose, so while I get the hang of the site's mechanics, any modifications to the logline will be shared by reply. I seriously don't want to bombard the site with multiple attempts. I replied to your first tip and I'm working on it. Hope to polish it and nail it very soon. Thanks again for giving me a hand.