Thanks! Mmm okay so it's not the facility that is unorthodox but what happens there, so I might lose that word if it causes confusion and also if the logline is to get buyers interest do I give away the twist?? Do I say what second skin actually refers to?? It's not physical like epidermis it's a psychological reference as the main character undergoes a identity struggle and splits in two. Her second skin being her alter ego, her dark side.
I don't know how much to reveal in a logline, but I want my script to be read and ultimately bought, so do I tell them it's a psychological thriller like Shutter Island/Raising Cain etc with a twist and do I tell them what that twist is???