“For reliable Riley Duncan, the weeks between spring break and prom prove that the lessons of love and life learned on the back of pickup truck, a dumpster dive, and from one strange Echo will become the events he’ll retell for a lifetime.”

Thanks for the comment KTMclovr, I have ditched this one...moved a whole other directin. Thanks for the feedback though...

This is a coming of age tale. When you break it town to all the events that equal what will be his coming of age parable, then you've already told the story. You need to find the mystery or a new angel and leave the person reading the tagline interested in finding out how Riley Duncan will come of age.

"Riley Duncan has fallen for the new girl; but in his quest for her love he'll need to get past his ex, the A-Team, and one nasty late night dumpster dive. Ironically, in the end a lone Echo may produce a report that even love can't conquer."