Categories: SciFi
Upon successful human cloning, the mother and the Military of USA destroy the Earth, to redefine ?Mankind? and ?Humanity? on a recreated Earth.
Someone here is going to tell me where I should be going, taking this story with me.
I agree with the others.? I cannot find the protagonist, and even if Mother was one, it's a flimsy one.? To conquer and destroy Earth to remake it in her own idealized version is one thing, but I don't see conflict.? What is terrible about Mother trying to destroy Earth and why is she doing it?? For maximum efficiency?? Evolution of one's beings?? Improvement of cognitive knowledge and harmony?
Something is missing and it sounds like a grand scope idea, not a well defined one.
It sounds great but I can not find the protagonist of your story, so it is empty in that sense.
Also... Whose is mother? The mother is a very important character to be in the story??
