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16 loglines
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When the town of Highsdale receives its demonic visitors through a mysterious Hellgate, a teenage high school student battles a malevolent evil seeking to break the lineage of the Huntresses and unleash a hellish apocalypse.

February 5, 2020
Attempting to reconnect with her squad, a stranded time-traveling soldier battles another soldier on a strange world to prevent him from changing history, only to slowly discover she becomes responsible for a terrible disaster and the deaths of a city’s residents.

October 15, 2018
After a miscalculation in a slipstream, a Roman space legion becomes stranded on a hellish world and must battle a powerful demon intent on shaping the legion into his own instrument to destroy Old Rome, their mother planet.

October 15, 2018
Orbiting a dead world rich with ancient history to find her people, a newly minted female admiral must convince a difficult security agent of her loyalties after being discovered she descends from his people’s eternal enemy, a nearly extinct race of superhuman slavers.

October 15, 2018
With the impending Ragnarok coming, a young cursed prince receives searing visions to save his aging star empire by pushing two police agents to investigate a sinister conspiracy undermining a planet’s sovereignty, only to realize they cannot escape the Ragnarok.

October 15, 2018
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With a wish granted by a mysterious being, an angry and disillusioned man becomes godlike and is pursued by a persistent ordinary federal agent while killing evil people in his wake.

October 15, 2018
When she begins dating a man twenty years her senior, an idealist teen must convince her overprotective parents he’s Mr. Right after they objected to his presence at a family dinner.

October 15, 2018
When he is framed for the murder of his boss, a genetically engineered assassin must protect the boss’s daughter from his enemies to clear his name after he is hunted by three major Syndicates.

October 15, 2018
After his home planet were destroyed by space ronins, the last gun-wielding cyber-samurai must track down and kill an old foe who intends to erase all life and create a new universe using a dangerous alien weapon.

October 15, 2018
After his people were destroyed, a space-faring cybernetic gun-wielding samurai hunts down a powerful old enemy to avenge his people and prevent a devastating alien weapon from destroying all life.

October 12, 2018

on A former one of the best CIA Black ops agent is forced back into action after a transport of currency is stolen by an unknown group he was requested to transport.

a retired black ops federal agent?I'd have to stop you there.? A federal agent is more synonymous with "FBI".? A black ops is either military, paramilitary, or not related to the CIA.? Usually the CIA has a more defined structure…
on Revised2: Upon learning their time-line has been sabotaged, an insecure, scatterbrained time-travel expert must win the faith of her cranky husband and her team, in time to save her wrongfully terminated project and their marriage.

This logline screams part of "Timeless". However, what is it about the terminated project that's important to her?? What is significant about the loss of marriage?? What is causing the timeline to slip that she had to go back and…
on Upon successful human cloning, the mother and the Military of USA destroy the Earth, to redefine “Mankind” and “Humanity” on a recreated Earth.

I agree with the others.? I cannot find the protagonist, and even if Mother was one, it's a flimsy one.? To conquer and destroy Earth to remake it in her own idealized version is one thing, but I don't see…
on When she breaks the law and names herself, a free-spirited cog fights against the local diversity officer in order to convince her town that freedom should not be outlawed –The Dark Age–

I had a minor confusion in the beginning.? You placed a comma after herself, hence the confusion.? Here's what I'd do. When she breaks the law and names herself a free spirited cog, she fights against the local diversity officer…
on Last one

What kind of android is it?? Does it have special abilities?? Knowledge?? Taught something on how to experiment?? Was it rogue or a government-approved android that was uploaded AI software that went haywire?? Just some ideas.
on Adar, an alien assassin, transports to Earth seeking three killers with chameleon abilities who escaped his ship. Adar must find his prey quickly before many of Earth’s inhabitants are slaughtered or live with dishonor.

Nice logline but got several questions. 1.? What makes Adar special?? Any special attributes to identify him? 2.? What can he do to find those chameleon killers?? How can he see them? 3.? What is important about dishonor?? Maybe refer…