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on A former one of the best CIA Black ops agent is forced back into action after a transport of currency is stolen by an unknown group he was requested to transport.

a retired black ops federal agent?I'd have to stop you there.? A federal agent is more synonymous with "FBI".? A black ops is either military, paramilitary, or not related to the CIA.? Usually the CIA has a more defined structure…
on Revised2: Upon learning their time-line has been sabotaged, an insecure, scatterbrained time-travel expert must win the faith of her cranky husband and her team, in time to save her wrongfully terminated project and their marriage.

This logline screams part of "Timeless". However, what is it about the terminated project that's important to her?? What is significant about the loss of marriage?? What is causing the timeline to slip that she had to go back and…
on Upon successful human cloning, the mother and the Military of USA destroy the Earth, to redefine “Mankind” and “Humanity” on a recreated Earth.

I agree with the others.? I cannot find the protagonist, and even if Mother was one, it's a flimsy one.? To conquer and destroy Earth to remake it in her own idealized version is one thing, but I don't see…
on When she breaks the law and names herself, a free-spirited cog fights against the local diversity officer in order to convince her town that freedom should not be outlawed –The Dark Age–

I had a minor confusion in the beginning.? You placed a comma after herself, hence the confusion.? Here's what I'd do. When she breaks the law and names herself a free spirited cog, she fights against the local diversity officer…
on Last one

What kind of android is it?? Does it have special abilities?? Knowledge?? Taught something on how to experiment?? Was it rogue or a government-approved android that was uploaded AI software that went haywire?? Just some ideas.
on Adar, an alien assassin, transports to Earth seeking three killers with chameleon abilities who escaped his ship. Adar must find his prey quickly before many of Earth’s inhabitants are slaughtered or live with dishonor.

Nice logline but got several questions. 1.? What makes Adar special?? Any special attributes to identify him? 2.? What can he do to find those chameleon killers?? How can he see them? 3.? What is important about dishonor?? Maybe refer…