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Hi, from what I have read an ideal logline is 25 words maximum. I often struggle to hit this, but while you need to set your world, I do think even if you do go over 25 words you still want to make this one a bit shorter. You talk about the love triangle, then the antagonist coming back. In the logline I'd just go for the essence, saying, it's a girl (protagonist) who has to get a guy (goal) who is infatuated by another beauty (obstacle)...set in Russian...blah. As it is, this looks more like a paragraph synopsis to me. I hope that's helpful. Best, Andy
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