Inspired by actual events, a Chicago man from a tough Chicago neighbor joins the Armed Forces, landing on D-Day +5, surviving the savagery of the Battle of Bastogne and guarding one of the Nazi’s Luftwaffe Commander, Herman Goering at Nuremburg.

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Agreed with csantan2, the logline lacks a clear goal. It could be that he wants to survive but it's not clear what specifically is threatening him.

Otherwise, this vaguely describes a situation, not a plot. Best to redraft this one so it specifies an inciting incident and causally connected goal.

What's the character's goal?

You are telling us what they did, not what we can see them do if we go on the story of your film.

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