It’s 2151 and a bio scientist finds herself in the middle of the largest coverup in history. She begins a race against time to expose her former CEO’s deceit or else mankind changes forever.

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Still not making any sense and has extraneous apostrophes. Why does it matter what year it is? There's nothing else described here which couldn't be happening right now.

Why does it matter that she's timid? How does this character trait affect her actions, conflicts, and situations within the story? Where is the irony of this issue? Why is she racing against time? What's setting that time limit, what's the rush?

What you're doing here is introducing ideas without making it clear why they're a part of the story, thus, we don't get a clear idea of the story.

Even more unclear is the latter part: who's going to be controlling society? The artificial humans? Why is that bad? Or does the CEO want control? Why? How's that going to affect people?

Like I said, the ideas are presented but not the story. Tell us the basics of what happens in the first half. And proofread the apostrophes.

I've read all the comments, responses, & alternate loglines in this thread and still don't have much of an idea what the story is about. You're all making it too complicated. Be specific without going into too much detail. Be clear without giving everything away. Just give us the basics and make it sound interesting. Protagonist, antagonist, conflict, stakes. What's actually happening, and why does it matter? Also verify the necessity of various apostrophes; that's just making it messier.

After reading your response here is my take:
Protagonist: A bioscientist.
Goal: Expose her companies deadly engineered humans coverup.
Antagonist: Bad company.
Stakes: Mankind ruled by the companies engineered humans.

 

In 2151 a cornered bioscientist must expose her companies deadly coverup to control the government using engineered humans before society is changed forever.

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