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"retired athlete who risks everything searching for redemption" What is he risking and redemtion for what and how does a race play into the solution?

Thanks Hugh- you're right I think it could be shorter, the right 'less' is always more huh !
Many thanks for the feedback - much appreciated.

"Sleep Monsters" threw me though. Definitely would give a dufferent title some thought.