Now we’re on the run, we gotta finesse a ton, mama say prison ain’t no fun. There’s no time for flaw, when we’re ducking the law, mama say shoot till we fall.

Who is the lead character?
What do they want?
What is standing in their way?

It’s not rap lol, it’s a free verse poem. You get the “we” from the title The Riley sisters. I’m only giving so much to make you read the story to find out more! A CEO of a movie production company is interested in this script so it has some type of substance to my work lol.

Appreciate the rapping. But this might fit better as a tag line of sorts. You know, the build up you see written on a movie poster. Log line needs to be a little more specific. Who is We? Why on the run to begin with? Industry readers want to know you have some substance to your work.