One lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship unexpectedly falls in love to his roommate but rejects him, as they sail together to Caribbean he attempts to commit suicide to end his depression.

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Great. So our Seafarer is lonely. Good place to start psychologically, as our general assumptions are seafarers spend a great deal of time lone, at sea.

Story Challenge: why might such a lonely man have have made such a isolating career choice - given it's so lonely out at sea?

Still the question of gender remains? Recognise the importance of identity politics, but "he" -> falls in love with ... Who? The value of this question is that of describing Villain - surely the best part of story development. Suggestion: Think maybe 'Film Noir' .... that is if the villain is female.

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